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Od but they’re old like thirty five and she is pregnantAfraid to tell anyone about the vision she’d just be labeled a freaky black magic witch right? Zellie keeps the knowledge of Avery’s future to herself and tries to act like any other teenager in love When they get caught on their way to a secret rendezvous by her mom and his dad they are forbidden to see each otherConvinced that their parents are freaking out unnecessarily Avery and The thing that struck me the most about her book was the voice it was perfect Zellie always sounded like a teenager without being whiny or obnoxious She was very likable and very realistic The story flowed beautifully I think with a lot of debut novels the biggest problems authors have is with flow and voice they just haven't figured out how to hit their stride yet But Stacey didn't stumble with either of those It had a real honesty with the characters that I appreciated Zellie and Avery were wonderfully drawn characters and I couldn't help but feel their yearningThe paranormal aspect which I loved was a bit different than what I'd encountered before I'm not going to give it away but it wasn't what I'd expected it to be and that's always fun All in all I'm excited to read the next books in her series and I see tremendous promise in Stacey's writing and her future endeavors Any fan of YA paranormal romance should definitely read this book

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Glimpse Zellie Wells #1Zellie vow to be together no matter what They continue their relationship in secret until Zellie learns that their parents are just trying to prevent her and Avery from suffering like they did The visions are hereditary they’re dangerous and if they stay together the visions will come trueNow Zellie must choose between severing all ties with Avery like her mom did to prevent his father’s death and finding a way to change Avery’s future I hate writing these kinds of reviews but I'm really not sure what to say that wouldn't be negative Which is sad because when I picked this book up off it looked interesting and I had high hopes for it I'm afraid this book fell short of my expectationsOne of the things I was really disappointed about was the relationship between Zellie and oh bother I forgot what the dude's name is O That says a lot doesn't it P goes to check Avery I felt like their entire relationship is pretty much physicaloh and random sparks when they touch Oh wait touching is physical too Basically I felt like there was no depth to their relationship at all and their basically just interested in sneaking out to make out and oh some other much inappropriate stuffLanguage repeated head desk All kinds of profanity flying from the pages or screen depending on what you're reading on of this book If you're anything like me who despises such things this probably isn't the right book for youThe premise of the book chick with powers that just started and she hasn't really figured out yet interested me and I saw potential in it but it fell terribly shortI bought this book and therefore was not reuired nor asked to write a review nor a positive one at that I was not compensated for this review

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Glimpse Zellie Wells #1 kindle È Paperback ´ ❮PDF / Epub❯ ☉ Glimpse Zellie Wells #1 ✩ Author Stacey Wallace Benefiel – Danpashley.co.uk Zellie Wells has a devastating crush on Avery Adams the son of her mom’s high school sweetheart At her sixteenth birthday party held in the basement of her dad’s chuZellie Wells has a devastating crush on Avery Adams the son of her mom’s high school sweetheart At her sixteenth birthday party held in the basement of her dad’s church she finally finds the courage to talk to him Turns out the devastating crush is mutualAs Avery takes her hand and leads her out onto the makeshift dance floor Zellie is overwhelmed by her first vision of his death; shocking because not only are they both covered in his blo I cannot fathom why so many people rated this book four or five stars It was a waste of time to read almost as if the author wrote it as a NaNoWriMo project and never bothered to edit it before publishing The pacing was the biggest problem it dragged so much that I kept thinking when is this going to be over? which was weird because the actual story raced through things so uickly it was like reading a book on fast forward It's like the author only wanted to write the fun romantic bits but needed to tie it all together with a plot so she would have the kissing love story scenes and then fill in everything else as fast as she could so she could get back to the romanceI think the reason why it felt so slow to read was because of the poor amateurish writing style You've heard that writers should show not tell? Well every single word in this book is telling There is no show no feeling in any of it When the characters are upset or angry the author literally has to explain why because it is impossible for the reader to empathize with them And that's my third complaint about this book the charactersThere is not a single person in the story who is developed realistic or even remotely likeable She has them reacting to events in ways that make no sense and only frustrate and annoy you They are like really bad puppets that the author pushes and pulls around making them do what she wants them to do in order to give her story a good plot A high uality novel has the characters direct the story not the other way around An author should be so familiar with their characters' personalities that they can put them in a situation and setting and then watch things unfold without having to force it This writer wanted certain things to happen in the plot so she would have her characters react in whichever way was most convenient for the story It was ridiculous One second they're in love destined to be together; five minutes later he is acting like she disgusts him; ten minutes after that he forgives her and yearns to be with her And the mom SO unlikeable Worst parent ever Worst WIFE everDon't waste your time or money on this book Even if it's free it doesn't deserve to take up space on your kindle There are better books out there God help us